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In my presentation, the pupils said it appeared that the middle part of the story wasn't very detailed and that I should add some more action to make it more interesting rather than plainly skipping from beginning to middle to the end. Also, they asked questions such as; 'who will play these characters?' and 'what inspired you to use this idea?' certain things that inspired me would be Ex Machina, I decided to duplicate the idea of only three main characters therefore making it easier for the audience to comprehend.
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